The LM3915 might melt if all the LEDs are lighted (bar mode) with 27mA each (bright setting). Then the total current in the LM3915 is 270mA. The 10 ohm resistor drops 2.7V and the LEDs drop 3.4V so with a 12.0V supply the LM3915 dissipates 1.6W. Its max allowed dissipation is 1.365W at room temperature and is less when it is enclosed.I see your supply voltage is 9V. The circuit I use has a 12V supply. I am assuming that since the MC33172 can go to 44V that the op amp will be fine, but will that change any of the other component values in the circuit?
Calculate a suitable current-limiting resistor (mine is 10 ohms) and a suitable max current for the LEDs. Of course your LEDs have a different forward voltage than mine.
The first opamp can have its gain reduced then the electret mic and R1 can be replaced with a 10k volume control.You use an electret microphone for your source. I will be using the output of the line level jacks of a car stereo. What design problems do you forsee using this higher input source?