Hello again,
I'm quite busy at the moment, thank you.
Epilot, sorry, I didn't give much feedback on that last response, but I'll correct your grammar this time, as I think it is helping you quite a bit. Like I have said before, I can already see some progress.
Thanks like always for your inputs,
O.K., first let me give you this: GUSP, which is an acronym for Grammar, Usage, Spelling, and Punctuation. The first point with this sentence covers usage.
We think of input as a singular quantity, when it is used as 'feedback.' Yes, it is true that a microcontroller, or amplifier, etc. can have multiple inputs, however, when used as above you should use it as a singular: input.
Now, a point about punctuation: commas and periods help the reader navigate and pace themselves. They increase clarity. You can make the above sentence easier to read like this:
"Thanks, like always, for your input." The part between the commas can be taken out, try it. (Thanks for your input.) Some people call the period a 'full stop,' and the comma a 'half stop.' I usually recommend learners to take a one breath break at a comma, and a two breath break at a period. Try it out loud, you will see what I mean. I'll make a couple of points later, with respect to punctuation.
Well, don't you think I have kind of grammer mistakes in my sentences?If so please help me to know that mistakes(I think I have those mistakes).
First, this is the way I would say it, and the reasoning follows.
Well, don't you think I have some (kinds of) grammar mistakes in my sentences? If so, please help me know which mistakes.
If you want to, you can leave in kinds of, but I don't think that helps with the meaning here, so I would just leave it out. I have included it in brackets, so you will understand where in the sentence you could place it, if you wished to.
I have changed 'that' to 'which,' but you could also use those. The reason 'that' does not work here, is because it refers to a singular quantity, where 'those' refers to multiples.
O I like philosophy, perhaps necessity is the mother of motion!
This one is pretty good, but did you mean 'Oh,' rather than 'O?'
Perhaps most of older persons that misuse are uneducated ,I myself have seen few uneducated persons that don't respect to others and the reson is clear, that are not able to understand the needs of a social life, in other words that can not be logical... when I was a kid one day I hit to an uneducated guy and said "excuse me", he said me what I can do with your pardon, he could not understand that somethings are happen undeliberate.
O.K., first, this is a 'run-on' sentence. You need to break it up a bit, perhaps like this:
Perhaps most of the older people who abuse, are uneducated. I, myself, have seen a few uneducated people, who don't respect the needs of others. The reason is clear; they are not able to understand the needs of others in society. In other words, they lack logic. When I was a kid, one day I bumped into an uneducated guy, and said "excuse me." He said to me "what can I do with your pardon." He could not understand that some things which happen, are not deliberate.
Child is correct, but kid is common so I left it in. The first 'that,' refers to a person, so I changed it to 'who' because 'that' refers to a non living thing. I took out 'a social life,' because you haven't really used it in the correct context, here. (My guess is that it is a term you have learned, and wanted to use, so tried to use it here. Am I right? The term really means 'what one does outside of work, ie: with one's friends and acquaintances.) The semi-colon - ; - can be used to break a compound sentence up into two parts. You should be able to use either part on its own. This adds some variety to your writing style. It is always more interesting if you vary the sentence length. For example, if you have a long sentence, follow it with one or two short sentences, and then another long one.
Education is so important for every society, perhaps education is the mother of kind of communication.
Just take out kind of, and you have a very good construction here! Also, a very true one. I don't think there is really hatred, only fear, and fear can be conquered with education!
If you have lot of money and no job then spend your money with traveling to other countries, do you want to return to your country only because of "language" peroblems?!
the language is a puzzle solve it!
Also pretty good, in terms of correctness, with the exception of 'with traveling,' where you should use 'by traveling.' This sentence seems like a very good opportunity to try out the semi-colon, and I want you to take a 'crack' at it. (In other words, you should try to re-make the sentence with semi-colons, and I'll give more feedback when you finish.)
Now I'll try and respond, at least to the last one.
My reasons for leaving are complex, and have to do with a relationship which has changed since my ticket was bought. Canada would not have been my choice; I already know it fairly well, and it is not nearly as interesting to me, as many other countries, at the moment. I have met some Vietnamese people, and would really love spending some time in their country. China is also interesting, as is Indonesia. I totally fell in love with Thailand when I was there, and really would like to spend more time. Boy, my list is already long, and I could keep adding to it. The Middle East is also tempting. I met a lady from Morocco in the airport in Taipei, and we hit it off, but since have lost touch. Her country sounds fascinating. Traveling, however, conflicts with my other interests.
The reason I joined this board, has to do with my life-long love of electronics. Perhaps a laptop with one development board would satisfy me for a while. I have thought about buying one, but they are so much cheaper in Canada or the US, so I will wait on that one. Some parts are really cheap here, and expensive in North America. I already sent a lot to Canada, as I planned to spend some time there. I doubt, though, my stay will be longer than a couple of months. (The last time I visited Canada in the winter, I nearly died! It is amazing how quickly one becomes unaccustomed to dramatic climates!)
I so enjoy interacting with you; perhaps one day I will visit your country, or you mine.
Regards,
Robert