It is still wrong. Pin 1 of each 555 needs to be connected to ground.
As a suggestion, try to make your schematics a little clearer, like the one in the LTSpice file I presented early on. Connections that go all over the place may be electronically accurate and may simulate correctly, but are difficult for humans to read. If you had rearranged and simplified your schematic, I suspect you would have noticed the absent connections to ground.
John
As a suggestion, try to make your schematics a little clearer, like the one in the LTSpice file I presented early on. Connections that go all over the place may be electronically accurate and may simulate correctly, but are difficult for humans to read. If you had rearranged and simplified your schematic, I suspect you would have noticed the absent connections to ground.
John