I think your opamp is too noisy to be a mic preamp and your maximum gain is way too high at 68,400 (yes, more than 68 thousand when a tone control is at max).
A sensitive mic preamp has a gain of only 200.
But how does anybody except your hearing doctor know how deaf you are? Deaf like a toad?
I have never looked at how much attenuation of sounds occur to a deaf person who can be helped with a hearing aid. 10dB? (3.16 times) 20dB? (10 times).